tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7727913168693888081.post600796649273882898..comments2023-05-12T05:47:17.284-07:00Comments on The Other Side of Sorrow: Five Sentence FictionMcKenziehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13428106500950557216noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7727913168693888081.post-72237300644308474792012-01-19T14:23:45.120-08:002012-01-19T14:23:45.120-08:00Thank you all so much for the wonderful feedback. ...Thank you all so much for the wonderful feedback. :) I'm definitely going to keep doing these, that was so much fun!!!McKenziehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13428106500950557216noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7727913168693888081.post-47238690466758043082012-01-18T12:11:37.416-08:002012-01-18T12:11:37.416-08:00This is amazing! I am in love with the first sente...This is amazing! I am in love with the first sentence. Nice job!!!Lillie McFerrinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05367116687588265202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7727913168693888081.post-13669734614443348692012-01-18T09:04:41.647-08:002012-01-18T09:04:41.647-08:00I love that you found a connection between two thi...I love that you found a connection between two things I would never have thought to use together. I love the poetry in your words, and I hope you continue with FSF!Clairehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14912028491141986358noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7727913168693888081.post-55004572319810648082012-01-18T07:52:47.261-08:002012-01-18T07:52:47.261-08:00I'm totally going to do this one on my blog - ...I'm totally going to do this one on my blog - probably Friday, but not the Lightning prompt. I think I'll have a go at the Poison idea. :)<br /><br />Great post! I agree - I think the last line really nails it down.Angelahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05145626477713347271noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7727913168693888081.post-68143415032654622602012-01-17T19:27:11.511-08:002012-01-17T19:27:11.511-08:00I liked how you paralleled the similarities betwee...I liked how you paralleled the similarities between lighting and mermaids. I loved the last line of the story!R. J. Ropsenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06906115269276664336noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7727913168693888081.post-70788437721221352202012-01-17T19:17:09.461-08:002012-01-17T19:17:09.461-08:00You are an amazing writer McKenzie! This is unique...You are an amazing writer McKenzie! This is uniquely poetic - a point of view I never would have imagined. Lovely!Jo-Anne Teal (jtvancouver)https://www.blogger.com/profile/10560042112608893203noreply@blogger.com